So fucking good. I want to see your movies in theaters RIGHT NOW.
My criticisms: the narration. I was so caught up in the amazing animation and art, it felt like the rhymes were echoing behind a veil, but then again I was hearing such beautiful poetic verses that I needed to watch it again, so even then that isn't such a bad thing. Just confusing at first, for the eyes and ears to experience two incredible sets of beauty at the same time.
That, and the voice of the narrator. Maybe this is what causes my confusion? Just didn't seem to fit the character for me. Would have liked to hear a stronger voice pulling everything together.
That's it. Over all, it was superb storytelling and direction. Congratulations to everyone involved in this project!
My main irk would be that your lip syncing during the yelling parts seems a little off and the scene doesn't come across as funny for that reason.
Glad I could contribute, emily, thank yous
and yes your lines have gotten smoother, especially on Aaron's face when he starts to frown, keep it up! although I still like the look of your nonsmoother lines as well
yes this is andres
Man, this is a really great song, REALLY great, in production, everything.. well, almost everything. I think there's a lot of Korn influence in here.. I LOVE how it sounds, but it's too much like Korn. That's the only negative thing I can say. Which is hard, because it sounds so GOOD. You know how to make a hit song, but I'd like to hear you try making it your own style/voice? I hope this helps! KEEP ROCKIN' MAN
Effective, simple, the greatest of RPG/anime soundtracks have this song's ambience, it is truly emotional and perfect, in its execution and simplicity, great quality as well. Reminds me of Chrono Trigger, it is very beautiful and lonely/nostalgic.
I enjoy the looping melody, but it sounds too repetitive. (THAT'S THE POINT I NO RITE?)
Just think it would be nice to hear the tiniest, tiiiniest, maybe not so tiny, but smidget of variation in between with the lead guitar connections. Also, that looping clip between parts annoys me. In other words.. I think it would sound much better with the stuff I mentioned. And better without the bad things I mentioned. In my opinion. Yup.
Still great, though. Would not be upset having to battle to this. 4/5 9/10
Loooove the detail on the faces at the bottom, and in general. I also like how the swirl in the middle looks like it's sucking/warping everything in. All I would like to see added is a little more stuff on the corners and some sweet coloring. (:
Simply amazing. xD Love the detail.
I am obsessed with detail, I'm afraid. Thanks for the kind words.
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