So fucking good. I want to see your movies in theaters RIGHT NOW.
My criticisms: the narration. I was so caught up in the amazing animation and art, it felt like the rhymes were echoing behind a veil, but then again I was hearing such beautiful poetic verses that I needed to watch it again, so even then that isn't such a bad thing. Just confusing at first, for the eyes and ears to experience two incredible sets of beauty at the same time.
That, and the voice of the narrator. Maybe this is what causes my confusion? Just didn't seem to fit the character for me. Would have liked to hear a stronger voice pulling everything together.
That's it. Over all, it was superb storytelling and direction. Congratulations to everyone involved in this project!
My main irk would be that your lip syncing during the yelling parts seems a little off and the scene doesn't come across as funny for that reason.
Glad I could contribute, emily, thank yous
and yes your lines have gotten smoother, especially on Aaron's face when he starts to frown, keep it up! although I still like the look of your nonsmoother lines as well
yes this is andres
Awesome. Reminds me of John Mayer with a bluesy Deftones. Love the vibe and simplicity in lyrics.
This is fucking awesome! Wish it had lyrics.
Very nice man.
The shading is very striking, and overall it's a great study in light and the human body. A very nice sketch with attention to detail! I would suggest thinking of a background to make it stand out even more in the final version.
Thx! I agree it looks a lil boring
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